If you live in Ontario, you may have heard me on the radio this week speaking about the current Canada Post strike. I also got the chance on Thursday to speak to a CBC journalist
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Toronto, November 24th, 2024

Progress Story #20 - two posters lean on a wall with a mirror in an industrial loft space. A window and curtains can be seen in the background. The two black posters look like the interface of the videogame Tetris.

Dear Reader,

If you live in Ontario, you may have heard me on the radio this week speaking about the current Canada Post strike. I also got the chance on Thursday to speak to a CBC journalist about the importance of letter writing.

I love writing letters because it's one of the simplest ways to get started with the analog lifestyle. No fancy equipment required: a pen, a piece of paper, an envelope and a postage stamp. It's affordable and quick. It's a chance for me to sit down and reflect. Like writing a diary, but better, because it involves a connection to someone I care about.

Writing letters: one of the simplest ways to get started with the analog lifestyle

But another reason I'm really passionate about letter writing is because writing letters in 2024 reminds us that we have a choice. 

Beyond the two extremes of "everything written by AI, delivered by robots, selected by the algorithm" & "paper letters delivered by horse-drawn carriage, 19th-century-style", the choices we have lie somewhere in the middle, in the grey zone. As with almost all things, it’s the dose that makes the poison.

Two black posters that look like the interface of the videogame Tetris. The first poster features Tetris tiles, each with a single word on them. Those words are: Stack. Ready. Player. World. Scale. Loop. Lab. Crowd. Space. Magic. Machine. Growth. Drone. Capture. Deep. Fake. Market. Mind. Interface. Winners. Platform. Story. Progress. The text on the second poster reads: Progress Story The Game for Platform Winners. Stack:  20,192,020. Ready Player World. Instructions: Scale Loops and Lab Crowds for Growth in space. Use Magic machine drones to capture Deep Fakes and Market-mind Interfaces.

What kind of buzzwords annoy you?

Yesterday, I read a fascinating article in the Globe & Mail. It talked about the future of language and writing when/if AI-generated writing has become the norm. Here is a snippet from Michael Harris' article:

"Passing around prefabricated blocks of text is efficient, to be sure, but it also makes a mockery of the word “communication” […]. Real communication (which is to say, real connection) requires labour; it requires us to think, to search inside of ourselves, to reveal". [emphasis in the original]

Even before the advent of AI, I've always had a visceral reaction of disgust to language that seems like it's parroted over and over without thinking. Sometimes the words annoy me so much that I just want to make a list and analyze them:

  • Smart Chat Experience
  • Auto-scale infrastructure to zero to cut cloud costs
  • AI-created funnel structure
  • Government UI overlays
  • Hyper-personalized, frictionless customer journeys
  • Seamless multi-cloud integration
  • Generative AI-powered tools that turbocharge agents
  • Dynamic creative optimization
  • Patented intent prediction
  • Customer journey orchestration

(none of these are made up)

Maybe I have an unhealthy fascination with the ugly, because I'm seemingly drawn to the language I can't stand, in awe of how truly awful it is. 

What kind of language rubs you the wrong way? What buzzwords can't you stand?

For me, that would be language that's vague and lazy. Language that feels excessive, that somehow has gotten out of hand. Excessive like 100 years of rampant growth of branches and bushes, completely covering a castle with a princess inside, like in the fairy tale Sleeping Beauty. A thick overgrowth you need to cut down first to figure out: what is this actually trying to say?

Language that may be hiding something.

Progress Story #20 - close up view, second poster. Text reads: Stack:  20,192,020. Ready Player World. Instructions: Scale Loops and Lab Crowds for Growth in space. Use Magic machine drones to capture Deep Fakes and Market-mind Interfaces.

When I started working on Young W, I decided to make posters as a playful way to process the ridiculousness of the buzzwords I despised. There are two posters so far, but I have plans for several more.  I've called them "Progress Story" because they show a version of the so-called "progress" society is making.

This one here is Progress Story #20. It's not quite poetry and not quite art. But nevertheless a type of creative outlet for my frustration with the language of the 2020s.

How to read Progress Story

The instructions to read the poster go as follows:

Read the words in any direction you wish, either from left to right, right to left, up-down, down-up or diagonally, always combining two adjacent words together, for example: Market Mind, Mind Interface, Interface Crowd, Crowd… and so on.

The words have been carefully chosen to make a reading in multiple directions possible.

Progress Story #20 is a type of diptych comprised of two parts: one shows the bullshit words coming down in rapid succession, like in the video game Tetris - you are trying to stack them up until it's game over.  The other part (pictured above) presents a reading of the featured words in a particular sequence. This is just one text that can emerge from the words in Progress Story #20; feel free to create your own version from the words in the tiles.

Toying with language that annoys me

Yes, it's a word soup. Yes, it's totally ridiculous. It's what I love about it. Because who says we can't poke fun at the things that irritate us? I like art and writing that plays with the thing we are up against. Toying with it to make obvious what's revolting about it.

Progress Story #20 should serve as a warning. A reminder that we have choice over the words we use, how we connect with each other and how we communicate. How we should perhaps pay closer attention to language before it's game over.

A grid of 4 images, 3 photos and 1 box of text. Text reads: Pop-up paper fair. Fri, November 29. A detail of a bookmark featuring red marbled paper in the shape of birds with gold decorations. Winnipeg Postcard - illustration of The Forks in winter, featuring people skating on the Red River. Two greeting cards stand upright. Cursive text on both cards reads: Let it snow. On one card, a brown fox stands in the snow with a red lantern beside him. The background is dark blue with snow falling around. On the other card, a brown squirrel stands in the snow holding an acorn. Beside him a twig of pink berries and twigs stick out of the snow. The background is light grey with snow falling around.  Poster for Pop Up Paper Fair. Logo of the Town of York Historical Society and Toronto's First Post Office is on top. The poster looks like a red postage stamp and is decorated with holiday lights, a small cabin covered in snow and two Christmas trees. Text reads: New vendors at each show. 'Tis the season for snail mail. Snowy Pop-Up Paper Fair. Free Admission! 10 AM to 4 PM. Toronto's First Post Office. 260 Adelaide St East. Friday, Nov. 29th: Left-to-right Studios. On The Bright Side. Picnic Ball. Steve Kean Photography. Shiball. Young W & more artists! A grid of 4 images, 3 photos and 1 box of text. Text reads: Come visit us! Nov 29th. Pop-up shop at Toronto's First Post Office. Three small notebooks in various shades of red featuring a candy cane, star or carrot symbol their covers. A cream-coloured letter writing set with a dark green border. The silver lid of the gift box lies nearby. A gift wrapped in a green and pink fabric featuring a floral pattern.

So what now?

  • Visit our pop-up shop on Friday, November 29th: Young W is participating in the Snowy Pop-up Paper Fair organized by Toronto's First Post Office. Come visit our table from 10 AM - 4 PM and check out our selection of holiday cards, gift tags, notebooks, letter writing sets, bookmarks & more. At Toronto's First Post Office, a museum and a full-service Canada Post outlet in a historic Toronto building at 260 Adelaide Street East. Free admission. We look forward to seeing you there! 

 

  • Get the Progress Story #20 poster: This diptych poster (presented above) is the second in a series of language-inspired art created & designed by YW. For maximum effect, read this poster by combining two adjacent words together in any direction. Hang up the two parts on their own or place them together in any way you wish.

 

  • Check out our gift guide: We've just published our second annual Arts & Letters gift guide with gift ideas for the unique people in your life. If you've liked today's newsletter, you may find this book from our gift guide interesting – it very much reminds me of Progress Story.

Sincerely yours, 

- Elena & the team at YW

Visit our pop up shop on Friday
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Image credits: Dahlia Katz (image 2, image 3 and bottom left quadrant in right photo of image 4), Madeleine Dalkie (top right quadrant in left photo of image 4), Toronto's First Post Office (middle photo of image 4).